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Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 19:59 Tue 14 May 2013
by RAYC
BBC grammar quiz wrote:"I'd like to introduce you to my sister Clara, who lives in Madrid, to Benedict, my brother who doesn't, and to my only other sibling, Hilary."
jdaw1 wrote:RAYC wrote:Personally i think there's enough grey area in this one to make their insistence that there is a correct answer rather shaky.
jdaw1 wrote:and one the machine said that I was wrong but that still isn’t obvious to me.
We agree.
If the BBC are correct, where does Hilary live?
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 20:10 Tue 14 May 2013
by jdaw1
I’d would be comfortable saying something like ‟! my brother who doesn’t, and my other brother who does !”.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 20:51 Tue 14 May 2013
by djewesbury
RAYC wrote:BBC grammar quiz wrote:"I'd like to introduce you to my sister Clara, who lives in Madrid, to Benedict, my brother who doesn't, and to my only other sibling, Hilary."
jdaw1 wrote:RAYC wrote:Personally i think there's enough grey area in this one to make their insistence that there is a correct answer rather shaky.
jdaw1 wrote:and one the machine said that I was wrong but that still isn’t obvious to me.
We agree.
If the BBC are correct, where does Hilary live?
That's true; if we are to infer that Hilary is 'my other brother', then it would also be reasonable to infer that Hilary lives in Madrid.
I would not write like this.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 21:11 Tue 14 May 2013
by DRT
The quiz before I read this did I; and one fewer point than jdaw1 I got. Served me well the Master has.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 21:36 Tue 14 May 2013
by PhilW
Another 7 here (one wrong, one didn't know and one disagree); agreement regarding the additional brother being very dubious.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 21:56 Tue 14 May 2013
by Alex Bridgeman
That was a bit of fun. I scored 10/10 but the BBC answers were wrong for 3 of the questions.
More seriously, I did learn the difference between a misplaced modifier and a dangling participle. A fact that will live with me for the rest of my life and probably never be used.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 22:03 Tue 14 May 2013
by Alex Bridgeman
Here DRT asks what is wrong with the site rule number 4.
"People's" is the answer - and I would have answered in the thread but the thread is locked so that there is no discussion of the site rules in that thread!
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 22:26 Tue 14 May 2013
by RAYC
I'm going for a comma after "names".
AHB wrote:Here DRT asks what is wrong with the site rule number 4.
"People's" is the answer - and I would have answered in the thread but the thread is locked so that there is no discussion of the site rules in that thread!
What is wrong with "people's..."? Are you being naughty?!
[prepares to be showered with derision....]
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 22:51 Tue 14 May 2013
by DRT
I didn't realise that the thread was locked "locked" being a thing that an Admin cannot see when viewing a phpBB forum.
But that is not the answer I was looking for.
Look at the two sentences.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 00:35 Wed 15 May 2013
by djewesbury
1. The two sentences contradict one another. What they appear to say is, "Don't cite someone without naming names; don't name names". Huh?
2. Surely, going on what he says in sentence 1, KillerB should attempt to tell us the source of the phrase used in sentence 2. Who said it?!
Am I right? I'm right.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 06:12 Wed 15 May 2013
by PhilW
RAYC wrote:BBC grammar quiz wrote:"I'd like to introduce you to my sister Clara, who lives in Madrid, to Benedict, my brother who doesn't, and to my only other sibling, Hilary."
If the BBC are correct, where does Hilary live?
Who says that Hilary must be alive?
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 06:24 Wed 15 May 2013
by RAYC
PhilW wrote:RAYC wrote:BBC grammar quiz wrote:"I'd like to introduce you to my sister Clara, who lives in Madrid, to Benedict, my brother who doesn't, and to my only other sibling, Hilary."
If the BBC are correct, where does Hilary live?
Who says that Hilary must be alive?
Going by the phrase "my brother who doesn't [live in Madrid]", i think Hilary would need to be the "brother who does [live in Madrid]" if the BBC's reasoning is correct.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 06:36 Wed 15 May 2013
by RAYC
djewesbury wrote:1. The two sentences contradict one another. What they appear to say is, "Don't cite someone without naming names; don't name names". Huh?
2. Surely, going on what he says in sentence 1, KillerB should attempt to tell us the source of the phrase used in sentence 2. Who said it?!
Am I right? I'm right.
I'm not sure i agree with this - i think the sense is "make sure you attribute work that you quote, because if there's no names, there can be no punishment". I don't interpret sentence 2 as a command ("don't name names"), i interpret it more as the justification / reasoning for the original statement.
In addition, I don't think it's reasonable to regard a common phrase of the english language as being within the scope of what is demanded by sentence 1.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 07:41 Wed 15 May 2013
by PhilW
RAYC wrote:PhilW wrote:RAYC wrote:BBC grammar quiz wrote:"I'd like to introduce you to my sister Clara, who lives in Madrid, to Benedict, my brother who doesn't, and to my only other sibling, Hilary."
If the BBC are correct, where does Hilary live?
Who says that Hilary must be alive?
Going by the phrase "my brother who doesn't [live in Madrid]", i think Hilary would need to be the "brother who does [live in Madrid]" if the BBC's reasoning is correct.
I think there are other options, any of which would explain a potential lack of specification of where Hilary lives, without necessarily including or excluding Madrid:
(i) Hilary is a baby or young child, so it is obvious that he/she lives with his/her parents who may have already been introduced (or the people conversing might be currently at the parents house)
(ii) Hilary has personal issues and does not like people to know where he/she lives, so it is not mentioned
(iii) Hilary is deceased and he is pointing at a mummified corpse or an urn on a shelf

(ok, this one was intended somewhat tongue in cheek)
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 08:47 Wed 15 May 2013
by djewesbury
RAYC wrote:djewesbury wrote:1. The two sentences contradict one another. What they appear to say is, "Don't cite someone without naming names; don't name names". Huh?
2. Surely, going on what he says in sentence 1, KillerB should attempt to tell us the source of the phrase used in sentence 2. Who said it?!
Am I right? I'm right.
I'm not sure i agree with this - i think the sense is "make sure you attribute work that you quote, because if there's no names, there can be no punishment". I don't interpret sentence 2 as a command ("don't name names"), i interpret it more as the justification / reasoning for the original statement.
In addition, I don't think it's reasonable to regard a common phrase of the english language as being within the scope of what is demanded by sentence 1.
No, I'm sure I disagree with that... I reckon 'no names no pack-drill' was always used to mean 'don't drop anyone in it' - you should not name names. I see what you mean but that's not how the phrase was commonly understood. Whereas it's being used here to expand on a first sentence which says precisely the opposite. I think.
BUT the only person who can tell us what was on his mind is DRT. Are you out there Derek...?
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 09:24 Wed 15 May 2013
by RAYC
OED online seems to support that it can be used paranthetically:
In the first citation for the phrase, OED online wrote:1923 O. Onions Peace in our Time i. ii. 25: Men had a way of omitting the names of those of whom they spoke; no names no pack-drill.
KillerB's usage strikes me as a play on that kind of construction - as if to say "if the real culprit is not named, we can't properly challenge / criticise / expose to ridicule"
Wherever we get to on this, we should make sure that AHB's initial comment does not escape scrutiny!
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 09:48 Wed 15 May 2013
by RAYC
PhilW wrote:RAYC wrote:PhilW wrote:RAYC wrote:BBC grammar quiz wrote:"I'd like to introduce you to my sister Clara, who lives in Madrid, to Benedict, my brother who doesn't, and to my only other sibling, Hilary."
If the BBC are correct, where does Hilary live?
Who says that Hilary must be alive?
Going by the phrase "my brother who doesn't [live in Madrid]", i think Hilary would need to be the "brother who does [live in Madrid]" if the BBC's reasoning is correct.
I think there are other options, any of which would explain a potential lack of specification of where Hilary lives, without necessarily including or excluding Madrid:
(i) Hilary is a baby or young child, so it is obvious that he/she lives with his/her parents who may have already been introduced (or the people conversing might be currently at the parents house)
(ii) Hilary has personal issues and does not like people to know where he/she lives, so it is not mentioned
(iii) Hilary is deceased and he is pointing at a mummified corpse or an urn on a shelf

(ok, this one was intended somewhat tongue in cheek)
The BBC's reasoning is as follows:
BBC grammar quiz wrote:The absence of a comma before "who doesn't" implies that there are other brothers. A comma after "my brother" would mean that there was only one brother.
If the BBC are correct, and the implication of this construction is that there are other brothers (or, in any event, at least one other brother), the wording also implies that the distinguishing feature of Benedict (as compared to any other brothers) is that he does not live in Madrid (and therefore that any other brothers do).
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 13:00 Wed 15 May 2013
by jdaw1
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 13:02 Wed 15 May 2013
by Andy Velebil
Drats, and I've been so good lately too

Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 13:10 Wed 15 May 2013
by RAYC
I'm more disappointed in jdaw1 for missing the more obvious one!
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 17:21 Fri 17 May 2013
by jdaw1
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 17:28 Fri 17 May 2013
by djewesbury
You see, what I don't get is this attempt to moderate pedantry. This is an all or nothing war. If you surrender one bastion or leave one bulwark undefended the whole edifice will fall.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 23:29 Fri 17 May 2013
by DRT
Caroline has obvious Lib-Dem tenancies. Extreme pedantry is a life-enriching experience.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 20:57 Mon 20 May 2013
by djewesbury
Why should I apply for this job, when the advert contains sentences like this:
"We are looking for someone with a PhD or equivalent qualification and have a strong and active scholarly record in the field of Fine Art, preferably with experience of teaching in art school. You will demonstrate a serious engagement with your own work, and be responsive to the varied and specific needs of those on this strongly student-centred course."
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 21:34 Mon 20 May 2013
by jdaw1
djewesbury wrote:Why should I apply for this job
Because it is at
Goldsmiths, so convenient for port tastings?
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 21:37 Mon 20 May 2013
by djewesbury
The power of Google.. Yes, that simple fact overrides other considerations..
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 21:48 Mon 20 May 2013
by jdaw1
djewesbury wrote:Why should I apply for this job, when the advert contains sentences like this:
"We are looking for someone with a PhD or equivalent qualification and have a strong and active scholarly record in the field of Fine Art, preferably with experience of teaching in art school. You will demonstrate a serious engagement with your own work, and be responsive to the varied and specific needs of those on this strongly student-centred course."
I’ll accept that there is some awkwardness here, but it is yours. You have asked a question your first seven words without a question mark. It is difficult to fix this just in punctuation: some re-arrangement of the clauses would also be necessary.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 21:55 Mon 20 May 2013
by djewesbury
It's all too much..

Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 00:25 Tue 28 May 2013
by Glenn E.
Noval Black on Facebook wrote:"Fantastic. The legend lives. Could be better than the perfect 1994 and equal to the 1963.” James Suckling gave the maximum score of 100/100 to our recent Quinta do Noval Vintage Nacional 2011!
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 09:25 Tue 28 May 2013
by jdaw1
Glenn E. wrote:Noval Black on Facebook wrote:"Fantastic. The legend lives. Could be better than the perfect 1994 and equal to the 1963.” James Suckling gave the maximum score of 100/100 to our recent Quinta do Noval Vintage Nacional 2011!
Is the grouch about ‟better than ! perfect”, or something too subtle for me to have noticed?
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 09:57 Tue 28 May 2013
by djewesbury
jdaw1 wrote:Glenn E. wrote:Noval Black on Facebook wrote:"Fantastic. The legend lives. Could be better than the perfect 1994 and equal to the 1963.” James Suckling gave the maximum score of 100/100 to our recent Quinta do Noval Vintage Nacional 2011!
Is the grouch about ‟better than ! perfect”, or something too subtle for me to have noticed?
ditto
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 13:58 Tue 28 May 2013
by PhilW
Noval Black on Facebook wrote:"Could be better than the perfect 1994
Noval Black is obviously young and inexperienced; You'd never catch D66 saying something like that, oh no.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 14:04 Tue 28 May 2013
by RAYC
jdaw1 wrote:Glenn E. wrote:Noval Black on Facebook wrote:"Fantastic. The legend lives. Could be better than the perfect 1994 and equal to the 1963.” James Suckling gave the maximum score of 100/100 to our recent Quinta do Noval Vintage Nacional 2011!
Is the grouch about ‟better than ! perfect”, or something too subtle for me to have noticed?
Presumably "perfect" being a reference to its 100 point wine spectator rating (in which case the statement "better than....perfect" would arguably be ok)
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 23:52 Tue 28 May 2013
by Glenn E.
jdaw1 wrote:Glenn E. wrote:Noval Black on Facebook wrote:"Fantastic. The legend lives. Could be better than the perfect 1994 and equal to the 1963.” James Suckling gave the maximum score of 100/100 to our recent Quinta do Noval Vintage Nacional 2011!
Is the grouch about ‟better than ! perfect”, or something too subtle for me to have noticed?
The former.
Perfect is perfect. "Better than perfect" makes no sense.
And to be fair, Noval Black's Facebook page was quoting James Suckling. The error is his, not theirs. My quote could have been clearer.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 08:36 Sun 23 Jun 2013
by jdaw1
The [url=http://www.rbsactiongroup.co.uk/?p=60]RBS Action Group[/url] wrote:3rd April 2013
Today many of you will have heard the good news that a fellow Action Group (RBoS) have commenced legal action against RBS and some of it’s former directors, including Fred the Shred. ! We ourselves, are pursuing exactly the same claim as RBoS and using the same arguments against RBS and it’s former directors.
Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 09:55 Sun 23 Jun 2013
by djewesbury
jdaw1 wrote:The [url=http://www.rbsactiongroup.co.uk/?p=60]RBS Action Group[/url] wrote:3rd April 2013
Today many of you will have heard the good news that a fellow Action Group (RBoS) have commenced legal action against RBS and some of it’s former directors, including Fred the Shred. ! We ourselves, are pursuing exactly the same claim as RBoS and using the same arguments against RBS and it’s former directors.
Fred will need his vorpal sword when they come for him, he can slash snicker-snack through their wielded apostrophes and go galumphing off.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 22:00 Wed 26 Jun 2013
by jdaw1
Am I being unfair?

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For my taste, it is borderline.
Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 22:19 Wed 26 Jun 2013
by djewesbury
This isn't about being fair. It's about being right.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 22:25 Wed 26 Jun 2013
by RAYC
I agree - but i'm not sure what's better (possessive "dolls' house" or non-possessive adjectival noun "dolls house"). If i were writing, i'd probably fudge it and go for "doll house"!
"She has put every doll so that they look out of the four windows" is also one that i might have chosen to phrase differently.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 22:31 Wed 26 Jun 2013
by DRT
djewesbury wrote:This isn't about being fair. It's about being right.
It is also about being consistent, which
some are not.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 22:45 Wed 26 Jun 2013
by Glenn E.
RAYC wrote:possessive "dolls' house" or non-possessive adjectival noun "dolls house"
But Molly has four dolls. Is it not her dolls' house?
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 22:53 Wed 26 Jun 2013
by DRT
Molly stores four dolls in the house. Surely the only correct answer in the context of this page is "dolls' house"?
The structure could, without this context, be described as "a doll's house". But the context makes the difference.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 23:00 Wed 26 Jun 2013
by RAYC
Glenn E. wrote:RAYC wrote:possessive "dolls' house" or non-possessive adjectival noun "dolls house"
But Molly has four dolls. Is it not her dolls' house?
Because it would still be a doll house (or dolls house) even if she had no dolls. Likewise if she loses three dolls, i don't think it should suddenly become her "doll's house" (which it would if you are using "doll" in the possessive as opposed to adjectival or associative sense).
I regard this in the same way as i do "Achilles Tendon" - it is not actually Achilles' tendon.
Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 23:11 Wed 26 Jun 2013
by djewesbury
Sorry, I believe it could only be a dolls' house. It is this regardless of the particular doll who happens to be dwelling there. It is a house for dolls. It is made for dolls generally.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 23:24 Wed 26 Jun 2013
by RAYC
hen house, chicken coop, cow shed, bird bath, rabbit warren, badger sett.
All commonly used without apostrophe.
I think "doll house" or "dolls house" falls in the same category.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 23:33 Wed 26 Jun 2013
by RAYC
djewesbury wrote: It is a house for dolls. It is made for dolls generally.
cf. also "
glasses placemat". A placemat for glasses...
Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 23:48 Wed 26 Jun 2013
by djewesbury
Doll house? Fine, if you're American. Hen house, chicken coop etc all fine: how on earth could you apostrophise these anyway? Dolls' house, however, is not an adjectival noun.
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 23:56 Wed 26 Jun 2013
by RAYC
chickens' coop? hens' house? I don't see the distinction between those and "dolls' house".
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 00:12 Thu 27 Jun 2013
by RAYC
Albeit OED seems to prefer "doll's house"....!
Akin to "bird's nest" perhaps (cannot recall seeing "birds' nest")
Re: Apostrophe crimes
Posted: 10:03 Thu 27 Jun 2013
by jdaw1
A friend, not on this excellent BB, wrote:Perhaps this betrays the length of time I lived in America (both in the grammatical and legalistic sense); however I would say it is blindingly obvious that it should be the adjectival ‟doll house”.
The actual ownership of the house does not pertain to any of the dolls individually or collectively, but to the child (or her parents) as dolls cannot legally own property.
Please could other posters state which possibility they most prefer, which are tolerable, and which intolerable?